Mermaid's Eulogy
So sad, she walks upon dry land,feet hot and tired from burning sand.Bedraggled hair and breasts aflamebegs for return from whence she came.Her hard lament has lasted longbut her dry tongues forsaken...
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Ah yes - a fish out of water...you tell the tale very well - on a 'scale' of five I have to give it full marks!
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Thanks, Willowdown. I figured this fish tail/tale would make a splash as one of my first offerings here. I see I am rated on a scale, and hope to post many other offerings here, many of the sea type....
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Ava, a very haunting piece that especially touched me as by chance, had a 'mermaid' poem upon the boarda week so ago. Also have a print depicting the happier part of this tale you have woven with your...
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I have quite a few tales about Mermaids myself.Why not post the addresses of your journals. If you dont want to do it here send me a Personal Message...
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ava..I enjoyed this very much..Like your style and this piece surely speaks of what is done in the name of love..the ending justified her.Deb
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Wonderful story and you told it so well...I like your ending. Very beautiful Ava I very much enjoyed
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Thanks to all for receiving my poem so graciously. I only now just realized I probably should have posted it in the Meter and Rhyme catagory. Sorry, I'll be more careful next time/next rhyme. :-DMy...
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Hi Ava,This is lovely. Read the comments and saw your note about your lighthouse fantasy...just finished a collab with Willowdown on the Lighthouse Keeper.Hope you'll enjoy it when we...
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Congratulations on your Nomination for POTW!!!A graphic and vivid picture you have paintedwith your words. The sadness seems to jump outfrom the page.Welcome indeed to Flowing Quills!!blessing, sharon
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